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This Sentence Has Five Words

Gary Provost, quoted in Roy Peter Clark’s Writing Tools:

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

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As the author of Doctor Spin, Jerry's passionate about online promotion, persuasion and public relations. Outside of blogging, he runs the specialist PR agency, Spin Factory, as well as the national e-learning academy, PR of Sweden. Jerry lives in Stockholm with his wife Lisah and his son Jack. Click here to subscribe to Jerry's updates!

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  • per_t

    Klockrent. Både förmedlingen av kunskapen, och jämförelsen med musik.
    Precis så är det.